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Don't... by ~Burnt-Toast75:iconBurnt-Toast75:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Don’t cry,
because someone is falling in love with your eyes                        
Don’t scream,
because someone is falling love with your voice
Don’t frown,
because someone is falling in love with your smile
Don’t hide,
because someone is falling in love with you
©2008-2009 ~Burnt-Toast75
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Author's Comments

Another poem my friend helped me with. This is not copied, but inspired by one of my close friends. (who just so happened to be the one that helped me write it.) Enjoy...


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~xscarcrowx Apr 3, 2008, 5:10:47 PM
That is really good.
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~FenceWalker Apr 3, 2008, 5:10:51 PM
Wonderful. (: Simple, but beautiful. Nice work.

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It's not illegal if you don't get caught.
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Mood: Wow! ~Thezephyr81 Apr 3, 2008, 5:10:57 PM
Wow! This is really good! Excellent!

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If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you even tried.
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~still-breathing8301 Apr 3, 2008, 5:17:16 PM
It absolutely wonderful. I love the way it drew me in like a moth to a light... it's amazing. I really like poems like this so make sure you have more. =]

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~95% of teens would cry if the Jonas brothers were about to jump off of a 10 story building. I would be one of the other 5% who would bring popcorn and scream "Jump, jump, jump!!!".~
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~Burnt-Toast75 Apr 3, 2008, 5:22:16 PM
Thank you very much!

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:) Writing Comes With Passion NOT Talent! :)

"I'm a writer because without it, I'm nothing." -draecana
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~Burnt-Toast75 Apr 3, 2008, 5:24:25 PM
Thank you very much!

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:) Writing Comes With Passion NOT Talent! :)

"I'm a writer because without it, I'm nothing." -draecana
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~Burnt-Toast75 Apr 3, 2008, 5:24:48 PM
Thank you very much!

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:) Writing Comes With Passion NOT Talent! :)

"I'm a writer because without it, I'm nothing." -draecana
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~Burnt-Toast75 Apr 3, 2008, 5:25:44 PM
Thank you very much!

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:) Writing Comes With Passion NOT Talent! :)

"I'm a writer because without it, I'm nothing." -draecana
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~still-breathing8301 Apr 3, 2008, 5:27:56 PM
^^ no problem.

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~95% of teens would cry if the Jonas brothers were about to jump off of a 10 story building. I would be one of the other 5% who would bring popcorn and scream "Jump, jump, jump!!!".~
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~fuegokid Apr 4, 2008, 1:19:47 AM
It's really sweet,yet the first thing that came to me was this:

Don't want you to love me,
don't want you to care.
Because whenever I need the ones that said so,
they are never there.

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FAQ#754: Where do I find a good artist?
"Good artists are the crappy artists that never gave up."*frzdragon
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